I really enjoyed playing through the Luffy birthday twine, so I figured I'd give this one a try! Enjoying it so far, but I wanted to let you know that some of the images aren't loading anymore. I think this is because they appear to be discord image links, which no longer work since discord changed how it's image links work but :/ I couldn't tell you for certain. Figured I should say something!
THIS WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOOD!!! I had so much fun going through all the different choices :D!!! Ahhh I'm also quite relieved that all the endings are good XD, Law deserves to have all the love in the world,,, especially after visiting some of those worlds. Ahhh some of these stories were truly heart breaking! Like the end of the gods AU? Luffy was really well written there too, all his responses felt very luffy-like ; w ; WWAUHGH the corazon law au absolutely BROKE me. Even Law himself was disgusted,,, buddies is it romantic to have the love of your life kill your worst self?
The Amber lead one was also another really tragic one D: Poor law already went through so much to get rid of it, and he already have seen so many people succumb to it's effect,,, to make him see LUFFY experience that too? HORRIBLE!!! HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO ME WAHHH. Nice to see that Luffy is a hopeful ray of sunshine in any universe though... THE TRUCK KUN ISEKAI AU HAD ME GOD DAMN HOWLING WAHAHAHAH. So good, a good change of pace from some of these heartbreaking ones too!
Ohhh... the Older AU was really sweet, I LIVE for domestic stuff like waking up in the same bed, heheh and it was really cute how Law thirsted after an older luffy like that wahah. ouggh my heart screamed when he got emotional over their wedding rings,,, The soulmates AU was also another really cute one :) I loved seeing the other strawhats, and sanji just seeing a totally crazy law in the morning and choosing not to address it was HILARIOUSSS. Both sanji and usopp teasing him about being in denial was also really funny ahahaha, just A TIER dialogue. Law was adorable when he started blushing cause luffy kissed his cheek ; w ; ahhh and when they add their lil nap together? I loved it sm.
The hospital AU was also kinda funny ngl XD I mean it hurt my heart as well, but its so funny how law was just like, OKAY WELL IDK ABOUT THIS WHOLE THING STILL, BUT SURGERY TIME LEZGO, and then started bossing around a bunch of other doctors and nurses or whatever he didnt know ahhaha. I ABSOLUTELY ADORED the wano prison au, it was such a genuine delight to read and I think it's the last one I read for my original first run before I went back to check everything. It was so, so so cute. It was such a neat original concept too! Law coming into the cell with luffy,,, oh geez the udon prison is FRICKED with the 3 pirate captains all stuck in there, they were already screwed with just kidd and luffy ahahah. It was super cute how luffy questioned law for being mad at him, and im sure that universe's law wouldnt have been able to stay mad at him for long either. Them cuddling up at the end made my heart melt...
Wow. I just had so so sooooo much fun reading all these :) Good job team on the wonderful work you guys all did! I didn't even comment on the art O _ O just know that i thought you all did an amazing job haha, the art really enhanced everything- i always felt a pang of delight whenever i stumbled upon one :D Seriously, brilliant stuff. What a fun twine!!
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I really enjoyed playing through the Luffy birthday twine, so I figured I'd give this one a try! Enjoying it so far, but I wanted to let you know that some of the images aren't loading anymore. I think this is because they appear to be discord image links, which no longer work since discord changed how it's image links work but :/ I couldn't tell you for certain. Figured I should say something!
THIS WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOOD!!! I had so much fun going through all the different choices :D!!! Ahhh I'm also quite relieved that all the endings are good XD, Law deserves to have all the love in the world,,, especially after visiting some of those worlds. Ahhh some of these stories were truly heart breaking! Like the end of the gods AU? Luffy was really well written there too, all his responses felt very luffy-like ; w ; WWAUHGH the corazon law au absolutely BROKE me. Even Law himself was disgusted,,, buddies is it romantic to have the love of your life kill your worst self?
The Amber lead one was also another really tragic one D: Poor law already went through so much to get rid of it, and he already have seen so many people succumb to it's effect,,, to make him see LUFFY experience that too? HORRIBLE!!! HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO ME WAHHH. Nice to see that Luffy is a hopeful ray of sunshine in any universe though... THE TRUCK KUN ISEKAI AU HAD ME GOD DAMN HOWLING WAHAHAHAH. So good, a good change of pace from some of these heartbreaking ones too!
Ohhh... the Older AU was really sweet, I LIVE for domestic stuff like waking up in the same bed, heheh and it was really cute how Law thirsted after an older luffy like that wahah. ouggh my heart screamed when he got emotional over their wedding rings,,, The soulmates AU was also another really cute one :) I loved seeing the other strawhats, and sanji just seeing a totally crazy law in the morning and choosing not to address it was HILARIOUSSS. Both sanji and usopp teasing him about being in denial was also really funny ahahaha, just A TIER dialogue. Law was adorable when he started blushing cause luffy kissed his cheek ; w ; ahhh and when they add their lil nap together? I loved it sm.
The hospital AU was also kinda funny ngl XD I mean it hurt my heart as well, but its so funny how law was just like, OKAY WELL IDK ABOUT THIS WHOLE THING STILL, BUT SURGERY TIME LEZGO, and then started bossing around a bunch of other doctors and nurses or whatever he didnt know ahhaha. I ABSOLUTELY ADORED the wano prison au, it was such a genuine delight to read and I think it's the last one I read for my original first run before I went back to check everything. It was so, so so cute. It was such a neat original concept too! Law coming into the cell with luffy,,, oh geez the udon prison is FRICKED with the 3 pirate captains all stuck in there, they were already screwed with just kidd and luffy ahahah. It was super cute how luffy questioned law for being mad at him, and im sure that universe's law wouldnt have been able to stay mad at him for long either. Them cuddling up at the end made my heart melt...
Wow. I just had so so sooooo much fun reading all these :) Good job team on the wonderful work you guys all did! I didn't even comment on the art O _ O just know that i thought you all did an amazing job haha, the art really enhanced everything- i always felt a pang of delight whenever i stumbled upon one :D Seriously, brilliant stuff. What a fun twine!!